Monday, June 13, 2016

Feedback

Feedback For The Learning Of Others


What type of feedback is this: Warm and Cool Feedback. 
This is feedback is on Patiences blog about Dissection.

I think that this could of had a bit more detail of what you did while taking your pulse and listening to your heart beat. one thing that I liked about this learning story was the fact that you added how you were feeling when Grace cut open the heart.

What type of feedback is this: 2 stars and a wish 
This is feedback in on Jorja's blog about Immersion - Blood Cells

I love how you have added the photo it makes it more visible for me to know what you are doing. I also like how you have put: What you did, What you learnt, and the next opportunities/possibilities for your learning. Next time you could add a bit more detail in the learning story like what better equipment you could use and a bit more detail on what you learnt. Other than that this is a really good learning story.

What type of feedback is this: Warm and cool feedback 
This feedback is on Irina's blog about Sketching 

I like the way you have what this immersion helped you with and new possibilities and opportunities. Next time you could put in more possibilities in your learning story.

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